Title

She had started out to help the whores of New York, but things had gotten out of hand.

by exidor455
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Corruption
Previous Chapter A tattooed and pierced whore

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It had started months ago. Sue had been shopping downtown and had been passing a grimy alley when she spotted a young woman dressed in the provocative and revealing clothes of a streetwalker, being smacked around by a muscular black man. He back-handed the young woman hard across the face and hissed, “Bitch, you better not be holdin’ out on me!”

Sue understood instantly that she was seeing a pimp mistreating one of his whores, and she was consumed with rage. With a gesture, she used her force field power to fling the vile criminal away from his victim, and slammed him up against a wall. Holding him there, she stalked towards him.

“You scum. How dare you teat anyone that way? You’d better make sure I don’t; see you round here again!” With a contemptuous wave of her hand, she flung him towards the end of the alley. He fell in a heap on the sidewalk, quickly got to his feet and shot a look of pure hatred at the proud heroine.

“You’ll get yours, bitch. Aint no-one gonna do Slick that way.” Filled with the desire for vengeance against the Invisible Woman, he stalked away.

Sue moved to the sobbing hooker, and fished a tissue out of her handbag. “Here, take this. You really shouldn’t let anyone treat you that way.”

“I know”, sniffed the young woman. She was somewhere in her twenties but it was hard to tell through the heavy makeup she wore. Her thick mascara was streaked with tears. “Slick aint too bad, he just….gets mad sometimes.”

“I’m sure. You should report him to the police.”

“No police! They won’t do nothin’ anyway. What they care if another pimp beats on his ho?”

Sue ground her teeth and fumed at the injustice. There must be some way to help these unfortunate women.

“Thanks for your help anyway. I know you mean well. But I’d better be on my way.”

So saying, the young woman straightened her clothes and clicked off out of the alley on her platform heels. 

Sue was determined to do something to help. The Fantastic Four were used to dealing with global, even cosmic threats, but they had been overlooking the mundane wickedness that went on unchallenged beneath their very noses. That would have to change…

 

Two weeks later, the Invisible Woman moved unseen through the seething nightlife of one of New York’s less reputable areas. She had been having quite an impact on the local prostitution rackets, using her powers to “dissuade” various pimps, and scare off some johns who were trawling the streets. She knew some of the prostitutes she had helped were grateful, but others resented her interference. But she was universally hated by all the pimps. Good! It pleased her that she should be hated by such vermin.

She realized that she was near the same alley where she’d first dealt with the abusive pimp, and to her surprise, she saw the very same creep standing at the end of the alley, with the very same prostitute as before. He had her by the throat and was clearly threatening her, his face close to hers and whispering in her ear, his face contorted with rage. Clenching her fists, Sue strode towards the pair.

Making herself visible, she stood before the pair in her Fantastic Four uniform. “You again!” she barked.

The pimp looked round, but instead of fear and surprise, his face had a look of evil triumph! “Oh yeah, bitch. I hoped you’d return to the scene of the crime. Get your uptight ass in this alley, now!”

Sue raised her hand and was about to use her force fields to crush the loathsome pimp, when he whipped out his phone. “Uh-uh! I wouldn’t do that! You try any o that super-power shit on me again, and this little honey will pay the price” Sue could see a video on his phone of another whore, tied to a bed in some squalid hotel room. Standing over her were a group of thugs, looming over the defenseless young woman and holding a variety of weapons, knives, blackjacks, and one had an automatic pistol.

“If you don’t do just like I say, ma boys will hurt this pretty little thing. If you do like I say, she get to go home without so much as a hair out of place. What you say?” Sue seethed with rage, but realized the scum had her. After a couple of moments of hesitation, she nodded, while giving the scumbag a look of pure hate.

“Good. Now come over here and we’ll see how you can make up for all the trouble you’ve been causing for me and my associates.” He walked into the dark alley, and beckoned to Sue. Walking stiffly, her mind racing to find a way to regain control of the situation, Sue followed. Moving to a spot where they wouldn’t be seen from the street, the pimp stopped. “OK, bitch. You seem to care a lot about these poor hookers, but how can you really help them until you’ve seen life from their perspective? Know what I’m sayin’?”

Sue blinked at him with growing horror, her mind suddenly understanding what she’d got herself into. “You need to be a ho to understand a ho. I’m gonna teach you." So saying, he placed his phone on top of a garbage can, balanced against the brick wall so that Sue could see the scene showing the defenseless hostage tied to the bed. Then he reached down and slowly unzipped his jeans, then tugged out his thick, black cock.

“You gonna suck on this real nice, baby. You don’t do me real sweet, just like you do your limp dick husband, then this little bitch will pay for it. You dig?” Seething with rage but powerless to refuse, Sue nodded again.

“Get on your knees and get those pretty lips around this mothafucka.”

Tears of impotent rage welled up in her eyes as she slowly dropped to her knees before the evil pimp, and moved her head closer to the massive stiffening cock. As she did, out of the corner of her eye she could see the whore, the very one she’d tried to save from this degrading life, standing nearby and filming the action on her own phone, with a wicked smile on her face.

“That’s right, you silly bitch. You should have kept your nose out of shit you don’t understand. I LIKE bein' a fuckin' ho, and when we’re done with you, you’ll fucking love it too!” Then she giggled in away that made Sue fear she must be unbalanced. She felt a tap on her head. She looked back up at the pimp, who was grinning down at her evilly.

“That’s right, you stuck-up white bitch. We gonna record all of this. Now git suckin', before I lose my patience! By the way, my name’s Slick. Seems like we ought to be introduced before you blow me.”

With a shiver of revulsion and horror, Sue looked at the bulging tip of Slick’s dick, opened her mouth and extended her tongue… 


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