Title

Skip ahead to Sue/Crystals release

by CJ
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Body Modification Change of clothes Marvel
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It had been a large amount of work over the past few weeks getting ready for this, but soon the loose thread would be taken care of.  Maria planned to release Sue from her virtual prison, though the slut wouldn't realise it, she would believe that she had been transported into an alternate universe's past.  It was easy to understand why she would think so since several historical events had taken place she wouldn't remember and the time would be what she experienced years ago thanks to the time acceleration of the pods virtual world.She looked once more upon the occupant of the pod marveling at how different she was now compared to the woman who went into the pod.  This Sue, or rather Crystal, had experienced quite a difficult life for the last decade.  

The changes were easy to see and Maria had been diligent in modifiying her real body to fit the changes she was undergoing in the virtual world.  Starting with the 10 years she thought she had lived.  While most people didn't change significanly in 10 years of adulthood, Crystal had lived a hard life with drugs, alcohol, and minimum upkeep.  It had been interesting to follow along the changes to Sue as she truly became Crystal.

As she looked over the body in the pod she remembered how each of the changes she made had come about in the virtual world.  Starting with the hair which was longer and blonder.  No longer the sunshine blond of Susan Richards, but now lightened by bleach to a platinum blond that Crystal had done after 6 years in the stripping and adult modeling business when she started getting feedback about her age.  It was meant to make her look younger with the brighter color and longer length.

Next was her face, a stranger off the street probably couldn't pick her out of a line up as Susan Richards anymore.  Part of that was Maria's own fault, one of the events she had coordinated in the virtual world was for Crystal to be attacked by the thugs of a crime boss and for them to damage her face sufficiently that it require some reconstruction.  Not a lot, she was still a beautiful woman, but she more resembled a cousin of Sue than her old self.  Her nose especially was very different from before.

And that was without mentioning the changes to her eyes, Susan Richards had been on top of the world with bright intelligent eyes.  Crystal eyes were darker and hard with experience of living and surviving on the bad side of the tracks.  There was also subtle wrinkles showing her age around the eyes.

The changes to the face were capped off with the colagen enhanced lips that looked like they were kiss swollen full time now.  Behind which were teeth, some of which had to be replaced with implants during the reconstruction, which weren't quite up to the level of whiteness that Sue had enjoyed on account of the smoking and drinking she now enjoyed.

Flowing down from her face was the change in skin tone, Crystal had been encouraged to tan and use oils for her performances that caused her skin to darken slightly.  Not a lot, but she was noticeably darker in complexion than the image most had of Susan Richards.

Then their was her tits.  Susan Richards most certainly never had a rack like that.  Crystal had been convinced after three years of stripping to get some implants when it was pointed out her breasts were starting to droop.  Not uncommon given the combination of her age, two pregnancies, and the amount of time she was spending dancing and bobbing around without the support of a bra.  The new implants had certainly reversed the droop and her magnificent tits stood out firm and in defiance of gravity despite their massive size of three cup sizes over her natual c cups.  Just watching those things bounce as she walks is enough to cause men stiffies let alone when she dances.

Even though her waistline was the same measurement it hadn't been left out of the changes.  Though her waist was thin as ever it was clear the excersizes that she was using to keep it such weren't for athletes like the ones she did as a memeber of the FF.  She'd lost the muscle definition that she once had and her stomach looked softer, especially with the belly button ring she now sported.Her hips were unchanged, still retaining the curves of her former self.  Though her tush was as changed as her tits, thanks to implants in her ass giving her a lusciously rounded bottom.  This new ass sat atop well formed legs that were basically unchanged, her dancing keeping the tone of the legs up even though her workouts were less athletic than in the past.  The tone of her legs was often enhanced by the high heels that had become a regular part of her wardrobe.

Of course those purely physical changes were over shadowed by the change in behaviour of Sue.  The old Sue probably wouldn't recognize herself in Crystal, the changes were so massive.  Crystal had several tatoos and her taste in makeup was far from what Susan Richards used to wear.  Not to mention the piercings and long fingernails gave the impression of slut and that is just what Crystal had become.

For one thing Crystal was quite the petty criminal, with said characters dislike for authority such as the police.  Thanks to the programing of the VR world that punished her for tryign to be classy or good.  Crystal had learned that the only realiable way to make a living was as a stripper or other such disreputable career field.  And indeed she had started as a stripper and due to some setbacks had transitioned into adult modeling and then porn.  She'd learned to avoid involving police in her life as it always turned bad for her in some way, even if she was innocent, something that hadn't been true for awhile.  This was due of course to the fact on the side Crystal had done some drug dealing, recreational drug use and on one memorable occasion had used her powers to smuggle drugs.

She'd learned to avoid banks and other finance institutions as when she had first started as an adult model she had made a small fortune and believing that things were looking up she had put the money in a bank and invested and started cutting back on the stripping and then out of no where the company she invested in went under thanks to their product becoming obsolete due to some new technology he invented and then the IRS started in on her because she apparently hadn't correctly reported some of the money she made stripping.  They also had questions about some of her past filings when she was married.  It was a nightmare and after that she didn't trust banks and other government institutions.  While you had all the money and were part of the elite they worked for you, but when you were on the bottom they just took advangtage of you any chance they had.  Or at least that was how things now seemed to the former heroine.

All in all, Maria was looking forward to seeing just what Crystal was going to do once released into the real world.  She doubted that she would be at all interested in meeting a dimensional analogue of herself and her former team.


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