by Danknoodle420
Storyline She Venom
Previous Chapter Mary Jane and the ambush

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/Darn it, we could kill him right now if we want! Cmon MJ, you know that he is lying. Spider never cared for us, for you. No one./ The Symbiote implanted it's thought into her mind. /Would you please just SHUT UP! He had been through enough, more than what you could experience. None of this would happen if you were to not corrupt him in the first place!/ MJ responded angrily.

/No... We only made him better, we gave him everything he ever wante-/ MJ closed her eyes in anger. /If you would just take a moment and get to know him better you would know what he want. He wants to protect those he cares about, those that are in need. Before his uncle past away he said something... With great power, comes great responsibility./ The Symbiote ignored her. /You don't know what power is, we used to be godlike. We could have ruled the wor-
/You really can't think do you. He protects people, make them feel free and free of villain shit bag like you. He swore to himself he would protect them, and do you even know how much Eddie meant to him? They were brothers!/ She felted a volcano about to erupt inside of her. /Hmph. They were not, Spider made him lost his job, wife, home. He lost everything he had. He deserve to go to hell!/
/Yet you still can't realize that you cost all of it. You corrupted him into a monster, you made Peter shamed Brock. You put his wife in danger in the middle of your fight, you put everyone in danger./ Venim flinched. /W-we did? That can't be possible, it was his doing! It was him! Not me!/ It pleaded. /You see, you don't know that you subconsciously amplify his emotions while being bonded to him. None of us knew until you're captured in the F4 lab./
/W-we're so sorry... We didn't know. B-but then... All the things that happened was because of... Us?/ MJ left Peter to rest after she bandaged him up. /Yes it is... I'll let you stay with me but... If I see anything suspicious from you, I'll rip you off. Also, you should go apologize.

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Gorel - 7/26/2017 4:19 PM
Would love feedback if any.
Danknoodle420 - 7/25/2017 11:24 PM
I got a feeling that I had burned myself out. I literally wrote a story and gave up after that. ??
Evva - 7/25/2017 8:02 AM
Danknoodle420 - try readcomiconline.to It works for every browser, but mini browsers
gothamalleyviper - 7/24/2017 4:23 PM
WW Van Bar is from a story with nothing to do with Werewolves, he is a character for a modern pirate story. I just wanted the worst name possible to make the guy jaded an a fighter.
ESchorcho - 7/24/2017 3:42 PM
GAV, what would that be about? Besides werewolves I guess.
gothamalleyviper - 7/24/2017 1:46 PM
Just wanted to run a quick Idea up the flagpole, Horrible Character Name: Werewolf Wrathbone Van-Bar
Danknoodle420 - 7/23/2017 10:50 PM
Do you guys know a website for Marvel comic? There isn't any comic store nearby and I'm too lazy to go out.
industriousedge - 7/23/2017 9:56 PM
ESchorcho, are you free any time this week?
Gorel - 7/23/2017 9:46 PM
Let me know of any feedback for the She-Hulk story. If anyone has ideas or wants to add.
Gorel - 7/21/2017 5:29 PM
Got some questions about a story idea on the message board if anyone is curious. Never tried a Witchblade story, thought it might be interesting.

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