No not enough...something else as well

by ruleradvent
Storyline Master PC 2.9
Previous Chapter An unnamed Ensign in the Federation

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No...not that simple he thought...lets have it that it looked like the previous contact was a simple fluke, we were going to make peace with the Centaurans....and something went wrong....seriously wrong...


The Bridge of the Yorktown was quiet...a simple mapping mission seldom triggers any excitement...then...suddenly a glittering mist flowed down from somewhere filling all about and when it faded...all seemed the same...but....different...the world the Yorktown was orbiting was changed...and it was no longer alone...The Enterprise-A was nearby... and in nearby the smooth swept back lines of a centauran Cruiser....

The Captain was no longer in his chair...he and his main officers had beamed over to the Centauran vessel to begin the first talks...


On the Enterprise Kirk and his crew gathered by the communications post...they felt very unsure about how it was going...Ian Camms captain of the Yorktown had seemed the perfect person to handle this first communication meeting...but suddenly they began to worry...something in his manner and voice...

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zahnskye - 7/20/2018 1:44 PM
Oh, as an additional note everyone should feel free to add whatever to the Almost Got 'Em storyline. I have no claim to it. I just want to see someone do something with it.
zahnskye - 7/17/2018 11:06 PM
By more characters I mean one branch of the story can feature Batman but other branches can feature non-Batman characters.
zahnskye - 7/17/2018 11:05 PM
So, I'm thinking of starting an Almost Got 'Em storyline, based on the B:TAS episode. Except with more characters and more... y'know... sex.
Gorel - 7/15/2018 5:58 PM
I've always believed that a post around 1000-1500 words is a good chapter.
colleem - 7/15/2018 3:40 PM
Ups Lol
extreme1 - 7/15/2018 3:20 PM
I thought you were talking about the size of of the words used in the chapter. Anything less than 10 letters in a word and it's to be ignored!
colleem - 7/15/2018 3:20 PM
Ups Lol
Solarsearcher - 7/15/2018 2:33 PM
Oh, you thought I was talking about “chapter” size...
colleem - 7/15/2018 1:28 PM
creating Atmosphere. Then it is good written i say :)
colleem - 7/15/2018 1:27 PM
i am with Solar :) Size matters IF it is used good :) Chapters should have a certain depth to the Story and should create an Atmosphere that is more than 200 Words long :) But it is hard to say a chapter is long or short! it has to be well written and

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