No not enough...something else as well

by ruleradvent
Storyline Master PC 2.9
Previous Chapter An unnamed Ensign in the Federation

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No...not that simple he thought...lets have it that it looked like the previous contact was a simple fluke, we were going to make peace with the Centaurans....and something went wrong....seriously wrong...


The Bridge of the Yorktown was quiet...a simple mapping mission seldom triggers any excitement...then...suddenly a glittering mist flowed down from somewhere filling all about and when it faded...all seemed the same...but....different...the world the Yorktown was orbiting was changed...and it was no longer alone...The Enterprise-A was nearby... and in nearby the smooth swept back lines of a centauran Cruiser....

The Captain was no longer in his chair...he and his main officers had beamed over to the Centauran vessel to begin the first talks...


On the Enterprise Kirk and his crew gathered by the communications post...they felt very unsure about how it was going...Ian Camms captain of the Yorktown had seemed the perfect person to handle this first communication meeting...but suddenly they began to worry...something in his manner and voice...

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gothamalleyviper - 8/20/2017 9:54 PM
So had a thought, What if Robin 2 (Jason Todd) was Jennifer Todd but was still a Robin and not a Batgirl?
Gorel - 8/20/2017 2:49 PM
Stumbo, if you want to add to Going Native you are more than welcome. :)
ESchorcho - 8/19/2017 10:56 AM
GAV, I loved your chapters. The storyline has a lot of potential. As for ruleradvent's addition, I'm confused. Don't get me wrong, it was well written but it doesn't seem to flow from the other chapters. Am I missing something?
gothamalleyviper - 8/18/2017 1:52 PM
Any feed back is welcome.
Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)
colleem - 8/13/2017 1:36 AM
@King :) Everything works here (execpt the Homepage itself^^) The only wish i had would be a writer that puts some effort into the Story. Background length character depth and so on :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:07 PM
Sorry Ruleradvent, I was a bit shitty there. But I hate non-chapters. If you're going to write something, write something. :)

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