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Watch as Ralph further tries to brainwash the girls

by mcFan
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
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Previous Chapter Let's join them for dinner.

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A few days later, Ralph tapped his index fingers together as he contemplated his next move with Sue and Janet.

He smiled to himself as he thought of his progress so far. He considered himself like a sculptor, removing the dross from the marble block and leaving only the beauty behind. In his case, he had to remove the trappings of wealth, class and heroism from the two superheroes, and leave behind the loyal strippers he wanted. But to do so, he had to be patient. Ralph followed the news, and he knew that the bane of most mind contollers was rushing the job, and letting their true personality rebel against the imposed one, and ultimately overcoming that. But, with patience, you could change a person's true personality, make them not want to rebel against their life, and, if done right, make them even rebel against those people trying to restore them to their previous personality.

Ralph knew he had to be careful with them, lest either they rebel against his plans or other heroes come by and meddle in his affairs prematurely. So for now, he has continued focusing on the little things. Using subliminals to encourage trust of him, although he thought that was probably high enough. He has also further encouraged their fashion sense to change, praising their outfits when tight and slight, giving them slightly slightly disdainful comments whenever they wore something a bit that covered too much. Mostly, though, they were hanging out with other women who dressed like that, so they were feeling like that was natural. He had gone shopping with them recently, to test how that was working, and was pleased with their progress. Both only looked at outfits they would have considered tacky a few weeks ago, but that were designed to entice men.

They were also both embracing their roles of servitude, taking orders and reacting as quickly as they could to serve the men who ordered them around. Ralph not only did that himself, but he made sure the bouncers and managers at the club would often give them arbitrary orders. ("Put this bra on. Nah, put that one on. Nah, put the original back on.") The women at first seemed to complain, but the smoke that was blown on them whenever they had to follow an order made them slightly aroused doing so and enjoy doing so more.

But what to focus on next? He was thinking of doing a two-front war. On one front, make Janet and Sue dislike the people they had to hang out with previously, expose their hypocrisy, so that they will reject their old life even more. That is where having them work part-time and expose them to crappy jobs where they are treated like crap would help. Have Sue work as a maid for a wealthy, racist former friend of hers with a horndog husband who would try to seduce Sue? Have Janet work as a waitress at some upscale restaurant, where she would get yelled at when orders were wrong and treated as invisible otherwise, but give her a chance to eavesdrop on them? Have her work at a country club and see how the wealthy men there talk about minorities? There were risks at any job, because not all rich were assholes. But Ralph could probably get some of his wealthiest clients to give them a hard time, and make the heroes less receptive to their old life.

On the other front, he had to encourage them to embrace their new life. He was thinking of having them meet some guys and realize how much they enjoyed the guys they meet in their current world. And, Ralph thought, he now knew their type. Versions of him. He didn't think Sue was ready to cheat on Reed yet, but he could imagine Janet bringing home a guy and fucking him. And with Sue and Janet sharing a bedroom, it was quite possible that Sue would see and hear the fucking, get turned on, and be more receptive to cheating on Reed later. Maybe with Ralph first.

Ralph tapped his index fingers together again and thought. 


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