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Why not just go into a hero's home

by C.King
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Category Marvel Mind Control
Previous Chapter They increase their powers and then look for heroes to test it on.

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"Why commit a crime?" asked the blond Letha as she looked at her friend.

 "What do you mean?" was the reply from the brunette Lascivious, confused about the circumstances.

 "If they boosted our mental powers to major leagues levels, why should we have to commit a crime? We could just walk into any heroe's home or base, heck anyone's place whether good or evil, and make them do our bidding. We would see if it worked, and would be less likely to result in us being sent up the river for a long time." said the other women with the power over negative emotions.

 "This is why we're partners. So we just go into a hero's base and take over, hopefully before anyone notices. The question is which of the good guys places are going to be our new home? The X-men Mansion, The Baxter Buiding or whatever the Fantastic Four are using, Avengers Tower or is it the mansion, or something else?

 Or perhaps we should try a villain's lair. Might be more fun. The question is who?" asked the mistress of positive emotions as they tried to figure out where to go next.


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Gorel - 7/15/2018 5:58 PM
I've always believed that a post around 1000-1500 words is a good chapter.
colleem - 7/15/2018 3:40 PM
Ups Lol
extreme1 - 7/15/2018 3:20 PM
I thought you were talking about the size of of the words used in the chapter. Anything less than 10 letters in a word and it's to be ignored!
colleem - 7/15/2018 3:20 PM
Ups Lol
Solarsearcher - 7/15/2018 2:33 PM
Oh, you thought I was talking about “chapter” size...
colleem - 7/15/2018 1:28 PM
creating Atmosphere. Then it is good written i say :)
colleem - 7/15/2018 1:27 PM
i am with Solar :) Size matters IF it is used good :) Chapters should have a certain depth to the Story and should create an Atmosphere that is more than 200 Words long :) But it is hard to say a chapter is long or short! it has to be well written and
Solarsearcher - 7/15/2018 12:13 PM
Contrary to what you may or may not have been told... size matters...
zahnskye - 7/15/2018 4:09 AM
If I write something super long it is because I'm trying to write more than one scene and sometimes I cannot fit everything I want into a short post.
zahnskye - 7/15/2018 4:08 AM
Also, short isn't bad. If you think of this site as a cyoa site (which it is) then each chapter should be written as one scene in a novel. Scenes are usually short and should serve a point.



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