BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by ESchorcho - 5/1/2017 4:47 PM

Colleem and anyone else who might be interested in adding to the BLISS Pleasure Cruise storyline, here are some thoughts on the story going forward.  I'd like to know if anyone else has any ideas for it as well.

I will write a chapter hopefully soon dealing with Storm and Kitty leaving the mansion.  There also needs to be a bit where Pepper comes to from her time watching the video and then begins to put the pressure on Tony to go on vacation with her.  Something will happen where he won't be able to go and Pepper 'decides' to go alone.  This is of course the subliminals making her book the trip on BLISS for her alone.
So Kitty, Storm and Pepper will all be on the cruise together.  Now, I don't know what to do with Mary Jane at this stage.  Any ideas.  Is there anything else anyone would like to see happen?


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by C.King - 5/1/2017 5:40 PM

 I just hope that Peter/Spidey isn't turned into a woman or has a woobie cuckolding. Cause that seems to be the story of many porn/addventure/etc stories. Especially when MJ becomes a selfish slut. So at least something which isn't just humiliation and/or de-maning for him.


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by JimmyKasche - 5/1/2017 8:59 PM

have him busy with Gwen, Felicia and/or Cindy as a consolation of BLISS needing his wife? :P 


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by C.King - 5/1/2017 9:07 PM

Or perhaps both a female/females being controlled to control/serve Peter so they can use his brain/powers/connections?


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by ESchorcho - 5/1/2017 9:36 PM

Both are good ideas.  I think that Max, the CEO of BLISS, would not want to bring any unwanted attention on his little operation regarding Tony Stark or Peter Parker.  Both are heavy hitters in the superhero world.  I can see him having Mary Jane be the best wife she can be throughout this.  Colleem, I know that doesn't leave a lot for her to do with the exception of her sneaking off for other recruitment trips.

And C.King, I don't plan on Peter being turned into a woman or anything like that.  Frankly, in stories like this where that isn't part of the plot I find when those types of elements are brought in it kills the narrative.  If that does happen I will ignore that chapter.

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