BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by ESchorcho - 5/1/2017 4:47 PM

Colleem and anyone else who might be interested in adding to the BLISS Pleasure Cruise storyline, here are some thoughts on the story going forward.  I'd like to know if anyone else has any ideas for it as well.

I will write a chapter hopefully soon dealing with Storm and Kitty leaving the mansion.  There also needs to be a bit where Pepper comes to from her time watching the video and then begins to put the pressure on Tony to go on vacation with her.  Something will happen where he won't be able to go and Pepper 'decides' to go alone.  This is of course the subliminals making her book the trip on BLISS for her alone.
So Kitty, Storm and Pepper will all be on the cruise together.  Now, I don't know what to do with Mary Jane at this stage.  Any ideas.  Is there anything else anyone would like to see happen?


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by C.King - 5/1/2017 5:40 PM

 I just hope that Peter/Spidey isn't turned into a woman or has a woobie cuckolding. Cause that seems to be the story of many porn/addventure/etc stories. Especially when MJ becomes a selfish slut. So at least something which isn't just humiliation and/or de-maning for him.


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by JimmyKasche - 5/1/2017 8:59 PM

have him busy with Gwen, Felicia and/or Cindy as a consolation of BLISS needing his wife? :P 


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by C.King - 5/1/2017 9:07 PM

Or perhaps both a female/females being controlled to control/serve Peter so they can use his brain/powers/connections?


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by ESchorcho - 5/1/2017 9:36 PM

Both are good ideas.  I think that Max, the CEO of BLISS, would not want to bring any unwanted attention on his little operation regarding Tony Stark or Peter Parker.  Both are heavy hitters in the superhero world.  I can see him having Mary Jane be the best wife she can be throughout this.  Colleem, I know that doesn't leave a lot for her to do with the exception of her sneaking off for other recruitment trips.

And C.King, I don't plan on Peter being turned into a woman or anything like that.  Frankly, in stories like this where that isn't part of the plot I find when those types of elements are brought in it kills the narrative.  If that does happen I will ignore that chapter.

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colleem - 1/15/2018 2:37 PM
Yang. Not a great fan of sailer moon but I read your story and enjoyed it. I always like stories with a well written background
ESchorcho - 1/15/2018 8:10 AM
Sorry Gorel. I'll try to write a chapter today or tomorrow.
Yang Xiao Long - 1/15/2018 3:41 AM
What do you guys think of the Sailor Moon story I added? I would love some feedback and help with it.
Drake G. Reaper - 1/14/2018 9:06 PM
Thanks for that C.King I've posted another chapter to Dropping By.
C.King - 1/14/2018 1:51 PM
Not sure when I can update DB:SW again, unless inspired. But hope it gives you inspiration and determination, Drake.
Gorel - 1/14/2018 1:30 PM
Hey Eschorcho, if you need more time I could do a side story, or a post that won't effect yours.
Drake G. Reaper - 1/13/2018 11:04 PM
On a side note Jimmy Hucow has been updated.
Drake G. Reaper - 1/13/2018 11:02 PM
Okay maybe that wasn't well thought out. The test is more or less if Baroness can go through with her plan and how committed she is to her goal.
C.King - 1/13/2018 7:40 PM
Drake, the plan seems to have more then one part for the options. Does the test only begin and end with the rescue to begin with?
gothamalleyviper - 1/13/2018 5:52 PM
Sorry Drake I am not feeling the SW at the moment, if I get an inspiration I might toss out a chapter, C.K I hope you like the chapter and the openings it leaves for Gotham.



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