BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by ESchorcho - 5/1/2017 4:47 PM

Colleem and anyone else who might be interested in adding to the BLISS Pleasure Cruise storyline, here are some thoughts on the story going forward.  I'd like to know if anyone else has any ideas for it as well.

I will write a chapter hopefully soon dealing with Storm and Kitty leaving the mansion.  There also needs to be a bit where Pepper comes to from her time watching the video and then begins to put the pressure on Tony to go on vacation with her.  Something will happen where he won't be able to go and Pepper 'decides' to go alone.  This is of course the subliminals making her book the trip on BLISS for her alone.
So Kitty, Storm and Pepper will all be on the cruise together.  Now, I don't know what to do with Mary Jane at this stage.  Any ideas.  Is there anything else anyone would like to see happen?


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by C.King - 5/1/2017 5:40 PM

 I just hope that Peter/Spidey isn't turned into a woman or has a woobie cuckolding. Cause that seems to be the story of many porn/addventure/etc stories. Especially when MJ becomes a selfish slut. So at least something which isn't just humiliation and/or de-maning for him.


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by JimmyKasche - 5/1/2017 8:59 PM

have him busy with Gwen, Felicia and/or Cindy as a consolation of BLISS needing his wife? :P 


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by C.King - 5/1/2017 9:07 PM

Or perhaps both a female/females being controlled to control/serve Peter so they can use his brain/powers/connections?


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by ESchorcho - 5/1/2017 9:36 PM

Both are good ideas.  I think that Max, the CEO of BLISS, would not want to bring any unwanted attention on his little operation regarding Tony Stark or Peter Parker.  Both are heavy hitters in the superhero world.  I can see him having Mary Jane be the best wife she can be throughout this.  Colleem, I know that doesn't leave a lot for her to do with the exception of her sneaking off for other recruitment trips.

And C.King, I don't plan on Peter being turned into a woman or anything like that.  Frankly, in stories like this where that isn't part of the plot I find when those types of elements are brought in it kills the narrative.  If that does happen I will ignore that chapter.


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by C.King - 5/1/2017 10:06 PM

The fact is Peter is going to be curious in most cases of what his wife is doing if they break up/divorce given his life. Unless he is distracted. You have Mary Jane in her Mara Joe's identity hypnotizing people... why not secretly hypnotize Peter to lead him away from her as she is being moved from him. Into another woman's arms (Black Cat, Silk, Silver Sable, someone else like a villainess, heroine, celebrity, etc...), with Max's permission. Just an idea...


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by ESchorcho - 5/1/2017 10:10 PM

That is good.  Maybe Mary Jane can arrive on the cruise line at some point and begs Max to let her get a divorce.  Max would need some coaxing but they could come up with the plan for her to have the subliminal be implanted in their apartment.  Colleem, how does this sound since you wanted to write some Mary Jane stuff?  It would happen down the line though I'm thinking, although that doesn't mean she can't go on more recruiting trips between now and then.


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by colleem - 5/1/2017 11:48 PM

Sounds good for later. First question I have. 

Does bliss know who she really married? It would be fun if they have no idea that Peter is spidey. 
For now I am not able to write something in my usual bad length (or usual bad English ??) so I can't say when it would be finished. But ideas are growing. Would be centered around pepper pots and Peter / mj at home just story no sex


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by C.King - 5/2/2017 7:47 AM

 Given Mara Joe has all of Mary Jane's memories and is slavishly devoted to Max, he should know. No proof in the fic, but the logical conclusion is yes. It's Mary Jane who has no memory of Mara Joe.


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by colleem - 5/2/2017 8:00 AM

From this point of view yes. On the other side they just wanted a beautiful woman that isn't world class model that everyone knows. 

So why should they ask a woman from new york if she is with some super hero. If they asked her she would have said it but what if they never asked her? 


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by ESchorcho - 5/2/2017 8:14 AM

C.King, so you think that Mary Jane doesn't know she has this Mara Joe identity?  That kind of contradicts my chapter of her in the penthouse.

Also, now that we are discussing the storyline on here I feel I should saw that it is taking a while to get on board the actual ship with characters we all know.  That is why I've written the step-mother/daughter plot to give a preview of things to come.


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by C.King - 5/2/2017 8:18 AM

Sorry, I figure that was the growing Mara Joe persona. From the chapter and the one a couple back, it seemed Mara was a secondary personality which was growing/taking over Mary Jane's life. Having all of the memories, while Mary Jane is unknown of everything. Unless you are saying Mara Joe is all that remains...


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by ESchorcho - 5/2/2017 8:23 AM

I thought Mara Joe was an alias, but it could be put in there that this side of her is growing.  Maybe that could be why she goes from having this double life but comes home to Peter to begging Max for a divorce.  That could work well.  What do you think?


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by colleem - 5/2/2017 8:37 AM

I also thought that Mara was a new personality that was imprinted on the real mj. When they need their agent mj goes to sleep and the loyal Mara takes over. While Mara is aware of all that mj does it is so that mj has no idea of what happens. This would be the perfect agent. 


RE: BLISS Pleasure Cruise

by ESchorcho - 5/2/2017 9:44 AM

OK, I will have to retcon some stuff going forward.  No big deal.  It's still the same person.  This is why the message board is so great for storytelling like this.  I do like the idea that the Mara Joe side is growing and eventually takes over fully.

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