The Mephisto Storyline

by ESchorcho - 10/28/2016 2:32 PM

I thought I'd start a new thread here to get the ball rolling on breathing some new life into the Mephisto storyline.  As I see it there are numerous ways on where to take it, and I'll offer some choices but we can discuss it all here.

- There is the most obvious, which I feel is to follow Sue as she deals with trying to seduce the nun.  This can coincide with the blast of energy that has caused Mephisto pain and has damaged Reed's lab.  Personally, I don't know how things would go between Sue and the nun, but when she could make her way to the lab I could see maybe Reed with a vicious-looking scar or something on his face.  This would be in reference to what happened to him in the Ultimate line of comics, and could aid in him slowly becoming this evil mad scientist for Mephisto.  Just a thought I had but we can discuss this, as with everything I'm writing here.
- The line that has been left dangling is Janet left in the bathtub in her older, weakened state and one of the college kids strung up above her by Sue.  I was planning on her doing a dark spell and using the girl's blood to restore the corrupted Wasp to not just her original beauty, but even improving it.  So Sue had been called away, and maybe Janet, being the wretched, evil creature she has become cries out for help.  This is where the Scarlet Witch could come in.  Mephisto commands her to join his already existing coven of demonic witches and it will be she that completes the ritual.  This will be her first major test in having to 'fall in line' with Mephisto's wishes as she and Doctor Strange are deep undercover.
- Speaking of Mephisto, he is badly hurt because of the strike of pure energy and he has slumped back on his throne.  So Doctor Strange and Scarlet Witch could come to his aid and out of nowhere the demonic Hellcat jumps out to defend the lord of evil.  This would introduce her back into the storyline and show that she doesn't trust the newly corrupted magic users.
- I had an idea for Christy/Sue to arrive at the Baxter Building just as Ben Grimm and the slutty Alicia arrive also.  Ben sees the barely-dressed woman and begins to come onto her.  Under Mephisto's influence he has become quite the horny scumbag and he leads Christy/Sue into the lower parking garage or something.  Then, just as they are about to disappear from the public's view a new hero or heroine could come in and attack Ben.  I pictured Black Widow arriving on her motorcycle and telling Christy/Sue to jump on.  She shoots Ben a few times with her wrist darts (or whatever those are) and rides away with her.  Christy/Sue thanks her and asks what prompted her to rescue her and Natasha could say that she had a sudden idea to come to the Baxter Building and that you would need her help.  Then she asks what's gotten into Ben and if that was Alicia?  In reality it was Doctor Strange or Scarlet Witch that put the thought in her head.
Then there is the whole Namor/Doctor Doom part going on that will need sorting out.  There is also stuff with She Hulk torturing some of the college kids to show her new-found cruelty.  Really, there are just so many ways to take this.  The only issue on my end is finding time to write.
But what do you think of all this? 


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by exidor455 - 10/28/2016 5:41 PM

That all sounds great to me! :)

I understand that finding time to write is an issue, but you've obviously been thinking about all this stuff and that's the biggest part. I think we all would rather read what others write, but if no-one writes anything, there's nothing to read. :)


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by ESchorcho - 10/28/2016 9:07 PM

I completely understand.  I will try to get a chapter done in the next week.


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by exidor455 - 10/29/2016 9:02 AM

At some point I think it would be good to get Succubus Sue and the good Sue together, and maybe to get Good Sue back into her proper body, somehow. Maybe using Baxter Building tech to clone her a new body, or some such? I think there could be good fun to be had with evil Sue trying to seduce her good self.

Or maybe the heroes could come up with a scheme for switching souls so that good Sue gets put back into her own into her own now succubus body while evil Sue gets trapped in Christy's? Just some vague thoughts!


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by ESchorcho - 3/29/2017 1:14 PM

exidor, I've been thinking of getting back into the Mephisto storyline and would like some things cleared up.  We can either do this on here or I can email you.  What would you prefer?  With email I can email you updates on chapters to make sure I'm not getting anything wrong in the timeframe of the story.  Let me know what you are thinking.


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by ESchorcho - 3/29/2017 1:53 PM

If you want to send me an email I'm at eschorcho@gmail.com


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by exidor455 - 4/1/2017 5:34 AM

I'd rather keep the chat here, if that's OK with you. :)


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by exidor455 - 4/1/2017 5:36 AM

Should have said, I'd be delighted to see someone carry on with the Mephisto story. It seems to have stalled in a big way. I haven;t given it much thought lately myself, but if you've got some questions, I'm happy to chew them over. :)


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by exidor455 - 4/9/2017 2:34 AM

So, any ideas or suggestions you'd like to discuss?


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by ESchorcho - 4/9/2017 2:34 PM

Sorry it's been so long.  I thought I was going to have time to write, but things have gotten busy.  I am going to try to get some writing done this week and then I'll see if I need your input.


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by exidor455 - 4/9/2017 5:57 PM

I'll keep watching and waiting. And waiting. :)


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by exidor455 - 5/6/2017 5:19 AM

I'm guessing things are still busy? :)


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by ESchorcho - 5/6/2017 6:25 AM

I've started the new chapter.  We'll see how this weekend goes.


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by exidor455 - 5/6/2017 7:50 AM

Excellent! I look forward to it. :)


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by ESchorcho - 5/8/2017 5:29 PM

Does Doctor Strange and Scarlet Witch know about how Johnny Storm, Ben Grimm, The Wasp and She-Hulk have been corrupted just like Sue?


RE: The Mephisto Storyline

by exidor455 - 5/9/2017 11:27 AM

Good question! I don't think it's been established one way or the other, so just make it whichever way suits your chapter best. :)

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