Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/20/2017 1:03 PM

I'll be starting up a story where Superman and the other kryptonians will be effected by a new kryptonite, one that turns them into monsters. If anyone is interested in joining me in it just let me know.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/20/2017 6:24 PM

I was going to build up a bit on what they turned into, whether it be something simple like werewolves or go crazy and say they turn into dragons.
Of course just like my others stories I have no problem escalating it. Power Species is a good example of that.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by CorruptionCentral - 4/20/2017 6:28 PM

I like the idea and the build up is good. Of course, I am a big fan of the more erotic appetites. My suggestion would be that whatever type of monster you chose, that they have a mentality like a pride of lions while under. Superman being the male that services the females.

Have you thought about the social dynamics yet?


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/20/2017 6:40 PM

I too planned on them acting like lions or wolves when turned.
As for their social dynamics I was thinking that they act rough and aggressive, driven mostly by instinct. Superman would of course be alpha male but the ladies will compete for alpha female status almost constantly. Not so much intentionally hurting each other so much as throwing their weight around and being catty. Eventually being just as much lovers as rivals.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/20/2017 6:58 PM

As for what they turn into I was thinking along the lines of a mammal-dragon or chimera and that their transformation is like reverse lycanthropy; where they change from exposure to sunlight.
As for how crazy the story can go I was thinking either they become the dominant species on Earth... Or worse it ends with them as titanic furry leviathans the size of continents with Superman mounting Power girl over the moon while Super Girl and Faora birth a litter of cubs in the hollowed out core of the Earth!


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by CorruptionCentral - 4/20/2017 7:38 PM

Interesting thoughts. I think there might be an opportunity for Darkseid, the New Gods, or Green Lanterns to try to intervene there. It would allow for some growth of the story


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/20/2017 7:51 PM

The Lantern Corps, Darkseid and New Gods could be interesting obstacles for sure. As for the 'kryptodrakes' each time they change, they retain a little more of their transformed state, eventually becoming monsters permanently. Also their appetites and instincts eventually win out against their self interests, abandoning civility for the pack mentality.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/20/2017 8:05 PM

Pretty much they know what they are doing is wrong, but their self restraint coupled with their gnawing hunger and desires eventually make them relent. Accepting or even embracing becoming big feral monsters.
In addition whatever kids they have would be feral by default, either savage or just plain animals. ( just to make writing them easier)


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/20/2017 9:37 PM

Their FADING self restraint is what I meant.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by CorruptionCentral - 4/21/2017 12:33 PM

Ok. I understand. I was thinhing, maybe they should go back to the fortress to see if they could find more information on what happened & where Faora is. 

I have this image in my mind of them eventaully finding Faora curled up in Superman's fortress bedroom seductively waiting for her mate. Possibly her tume in the Phantom Zone making the Monster Kryptonite work daster on her. Please let me know what you think


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/21/2017 12:47 PM

That was my plan too. and a neat addition I might just add later CC.
Also one other question to ask out of preference. Do you want them to get buffer over time? Fatter? Or both?


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/21/2017 8:35 PM

Also their sex will become more and more animalistic to the point where they are no longer making love so much as just rutting.
Also I do like the idea of Faora being the catalyst for them going feral. Since the monster kryptonite made her totally wild and uninhibited.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/23/2017 8:22 PM

Another idea is when their feral children reach adulthood, their parents will be inspired by their behaviour, becoming wild themselves. Like Power Girl abandoning her figure to eat to her heart's content, Super Girl mating with Faora's son and Superman marking the fortress with his cum. abandoning all civility to be krypto-drakes.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/23/2017 10:27 PM

Faora herself could convince them all to embrace their urges and breed an entire race of kryptodrakes. Growing bigger and fatter all the while, losing any trace of their humanity.
Another thought is that as well as continuing to grow, they could keep mutating. One direction I thought about was they grow extra horns, spikes, extra tits, even going all out chimera and sprouting 2 extra heads.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by colleem - 4/24/2017 2:47 AM

Hey gorel. Normally these mobster stories aren't something for me but I see a possibility that I could write something there too. But I wanted to talk to you about the story before I ruin something. 

I understand it tight that the kryptonians transform like werewolves under the influence of the sun right? And that they have no or only dreamlike memories of the time as dragon right? 
And the source of it is the black kryponit 


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/24/2017 4:46 AM

That is correct Colleem,  but in time their werewolf dragon forms become permanent.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by colleem - 4/24/2017 5:07 AM

Okay. Then I had an idea where they try to Study the stone more and they get without noticing into a hot sex session in human form and the more the stone is near them the less dangerous he appears.. Maybe eating some of it 


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/24/2017 3:15 PM

I did have that planned, where the stone would only make their situation worse. Each time they change back they'll be less human every time, including self restraint The whole eating the kryptonite is a good idea though. Maybe Faora will crush it into dust and trick them into swallowing it.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/24/2017 3:19 PM

I did have the idea where they slowly gain memories of when they were monsters. Power Girl will get mad when she remembers Superman screwing her and Super Girl and confronts him. But by then their urges have begun to kick in and instead of an argument they descend into a threesome.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 4/24/2017 3:23 PM

Sure! And obviously the 4th kryptodrake they are flying to is Faora-Ui in a rampage.
Which brings the question of whether Superboy should be added later.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 5/17/2017 7:22 PM

Hmm, interesting thought. I guess their changes could act like lycanthropy. Making it so that anyone scratched or bitten are turned into kryptodrakes.
Otherwise I was thinking of having the ladies rapidly bear a litter of cubs that easily get out of control.


RE: Monster Kryptonite

by Gorel - 6/10/2017 8:01 AM

So how far should the story go?
One direction is they could spawn a whole race of kryptodrakes and/or turn power heroes into drakes to add to their flock.
Another is they could just keep growing and mutating until they are enormous, like becoming 3 headed chimera monsters the size of cities or something.
Or both, decisions decisions...

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