The Strip Club

by C.King - 8/1/2017 12:45 PM

  1. A mix of the traditional strip club makes people want to be strippers/hookers story, and a variant I have read on EMCSA called Funny Money with a hero based sequel Super Talent. In those fic, the 'hero' gets enchanted money which makes women want to be strippers. Unless they put them away like strippers, in their cleavage or under their clothes, which causes physical transformations.
  2. The idea is a mix or one or the other of these ideas. As a hero/villain/civilan/etc gets the money and/or location. It makes them want to run a sex business while giving them the power to convince/convert others to work there, be customers, etc.
  3. Any interest, suggestions, ideas? Franchises you want to use?


RE: The Strip Club

by exidor455 - 8/6/2017 3:41 AM

Sounds like a promising start. As always with these things, it all really depends on which characters are involved and what direction the story takes. 

I'm definitely more of a Marvel fan, and my fave character to get embroiled in such shenanigans is Sue Storm, but that won't come as a surprise to anyone who's read my stuff! LOL


RE: The Strip Club

by C.King - 8/6/2017 12:59 PM

Another idea is more then one person being in charge. A Pimp and A Madam for example.


RE: The Strip Club

by C.King - 8/7/2017 12:17 PM

One idea of the above I had was an inheritance of the strip club/Sexy Loci being shared by a couple of people. The idea in my head currently was Peter Parker, Sue Storm-Richards, Carol Danvers and Emma Frost. Three Blondes and a Spider. With the four being converted to horny sex employers and even workers in some cases. Thoughts?


RE: The Strip Club

by JimmyKasche - 8/7/2017 4:31 PM

I'm always down for Emma Frost and Carol  Danvers being slutty :D 


RE: The Strip Club

by colleem - 8/8/2017 2:10 AM

Some questions before I maybe enter the story. 

1 do the four of them know who the other is? I mean are they all aware that Peter is spider man or that Emma is an x men? 
2 is the transformation fast or can it take a more subtle way? 
3 does the house only affect the four of them or visitors too? Let us say Peter takes mj to his new house? 


RE: The Strip Club

by exidor455 - 8/8/2017 3:40 AM

Get Susan Storm-Richards in there and I'll be happy. :)


RE: The Strip Club

by C.King - 8/8/2017 9:15 AM

  1.  Yes
  2. Either one, but it will not stop as long as they own the building.
  3.  The ownership affects them, but over time they can affect others. Turning them into sex workers. Like strippers, hookers, porn stars and the like.
  4. It's less a house then a tall building which double as a hotel, cause in the past those were used as brothels in places like New York. Due to certain laws and codes.


RE: The Strip Club

by exidor455 - 8/8/2017 11:12 AM

So, I assume each of the four will be affected in a different way? Or do they all start to get the same ideas/urges? Do they need to move into the building or is just owning it enough to start the effect?

And what's the cause of it? A curse or magic spell? If so, who cast it?


RE: The Strip Club

by C.King - 8/8/2017 11:31 AM

  1.  Maybe, maybe not. The idea is they become more sexual, more willing to ruin a sex business as well as converting others. Whatever way that works (fast or slow conversion, personal aspects, singular or group conversion, etc) the building will do.
  2.  Just owning it. But you could have longer exposure to the building or sexual stimulus could make the conversions work faster, easier and better.
  3.  Think of it like a sexual location spirit. Like how Mogo is a living planet, or Uncle Sam is the spirit of America. The origins of the spirit I haven't developed yet. The spirit could be born of magic, or a collection of erotic themed psionic energies, or just a horny spirit.


RE: The Strip Club

by colleem - 8/8/2017 12:58 PM

maybe i will join. i am bored of writing storys all alone :(


RE: The Strip Club

by exidor455 - 8/8/2017 1:03 PM

I know what you mean Colleem. It's more fun to write these things when you're not the only one doing all the work! Hopefully if a few of us get involved in this one it will bounce back and forth a bit. I will have a think about how the building could affect - you guessed it - Sue Storm-Richards! :)


RE: The Strip Club

by colleem - 8/8/2017 1:09 PM

i hoped on the satt storyline^^ not this one

i will start with a descrition of the house


RE: The Strip Club

by exidor455 - 8/8/2017 1:31 PM

I've added a quick chapter following Sue. Hope it's OK. :)


RE: The Strip Club

by colleem - 8/9/2017 12:31 AM

I forgot the most important thing to ask. 

Is the Building self aware? Ego the living planet is a personality. He can interact with others. How is it with the building. 
Does it has a own personality or is it more like amplify emotions without having own? 


RE: The Strip Club

by C.King - 8/9/2017 12:12 PM

 The building is alive, but whether it can communicate is not set in stone. Perhaps it can speak like Ego, or maybe it works through images (daydreams, dreams, sensing things, etc) like Warehouse 13. It's not evil, but lives for sex, perversion and erotic lifestyle. As well as making people due the same. So it doesn't care if you're a hero or villain, as long as there is sex. Which is why it uses it powers to make people want to become sex workers.


RE: The Strip Club

by exidor455 - 8/9/2017 3:31 PM

Cool. I'm going to keep rolling along with the Sue side of things until someone chips in with something else. :)


RE: The Strip Club

by exidor455 - 8/10/2017 12:44 AM

So, the way I've written my chapters, the Building has given Sue an obsession with porn, partly to corrupt her sexually but also to distract her so that she won't do any research and find out about the Building's history. 

How will the others be affected? If Sue is going to take the porn route, that leaves prostitution and stripping. Emma and Carol are the obvious choices there. What about Peter? Pimp and voyeur, perhaps? Maybe he starts to get ideas for a new career for MJ, and could get Black Cat involved too?


RE: The Strip Club

by colleem - 8/10/2017 6:01 AM

Will update it when I am at home. Bad connection at work. 


RE: The Strip Club

by CorruptionCentral - 8/10/2017 6:19 AM

Great job on Sexi Loci, one and all. 

I remember reading in one comic of a sentient street that protected its people. I can't remember what comic, but for some reason I have an impression it was something like Runaways or Gen 13.  Anyway, this is a wonderful variation. 
So here is a question for you: We've seen that the house can regenerate itself based on the power it gets from owners and tenants, but now that it is powered by superhumans, can it grow to additional buildings? Possibly taking the whole block eventually? I could see, several chapters deeper, a burgeoning red light district growing in this area. As the spirit grow stronger, neighbors sell to the four owners and the power spreads an multiplies; or maybe other heroes buy in the neighborhood and fall under the spirit's domain.  
Just thinking out loud. Love the work so far.


RE: The Strip Club

by colleem - 8/10/2017 6:42 AM

Sounds good but has a flaw^^

If so it must absorb the Power of more owners. But we could say that Peter Parkers strange Connection to the Multiverse could Trigger that the House sooner or later could absorb the power off all Spiders in all other Universes?I like to see the Building as the horny sister of Stephen Kings Shinning house :)


RE: The Strip Club

by C.King - 8/10/2017 7:18 AM

  1. Shining might be a good example, but with sex instead of violence. Also given it's nature as a spirit, it could be possible it warps space. Making it bigger on the inside then outside, even if no one notices. I think Doctor Strange's Brownstone is like that.
  2. It could be possible that the heroes/villains who come under the quartet's influence add their power to the house. Heck, the house might have access to the powers of our heroes. And while Spider or Kree powers aren't as useful at the moment, invisibility and telepathy could be. Since invisibility could hide things it doesn't want seen yet, and telepath could be used to convince people to accept it's ways faster.


RE: The Strip Club

by colleem - 8/10/2017 8:02 AM

Nice idea but I would take some time until the spirit learns how to use these skills. Could be fun if it can't control the invisibility or the telepathy and all of them thinks the house is cursed. Items disappear or they hear voices 


RE: The Strip Club

by C.King - 8/10/2017 8:12 AM

Maybe different powers it's better at then others. Like it is skilled with Telepathy given it's power to influence minds, then invisibility which it has no experience with.


RE: The Strip Club

by exidor455 - 8/11/2017 7:42 AM

About the four of them having to move into the building, if Sue moves out of the Baxter Building and into the new place, that's immediately going to cause a situation with Reed and the rest of the FF. Not a problem but it would require a bit of thought. I'm also undecided about how far to go with the the porn angle. She could set up her own porn company, based in the building? Or sign a deal to become a performer with an existing porn company? There could be lots of fun with the implications of that but it's going to get lots of attention and people would no doubt assume that there must be some outside influence responsible for her sudden change of character.


RE: The Strip Club

by C.King - 8/11/2017 7:46 AM

I just gave a bedroom, not suggesting they move in yet. Plus Emma with her electronics and money could create ways like holographic watches to disguise themselves. Once she's been effected.


RE: The Strip Club

by exidor455 - 8/12/2017 7:29 PM

So, it stalled again. as these things always do. :(


RE: The Strip Club

by CorruptionCentral - 8/12/2017 10:36 PM

Just my opinion, we need people that want to write for the specific characters, starting with the owners. Lets take a minute to think how this affects people like Peter Parker, Carol Danvers, and Emma Frost. Us this the Peter Parker before or after 'One More Day' (i.e. married to MJ or not)?

I could see Peter having fantasies about Black Cat and even the other owners while in their presence. I could see Emma mind raping Scott while he is trying to teach. I could see Carol getting so horny that she gives in to one of the more amorous avengers or other heroes (Hercules, Star Fox, Human Torch, etc.)
Lets talk about things that would like to see and then see if that helps get chapters written,


RE: The Strip Club

by colleem - 8/13/2017 1:10 AM

I would focus on the House and Peter Parker. But to be honest. I do not know what it brings to write here. Half of the Time the side is down or people write three sentence chapters.... 

also i wait for the Satt storyline. But i could maybe write something within the next week

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