Holiday Love Slaves

by JimmyKasche - 12/18/2017 9:37 AM

As I said on the wall.

Decided to reboot Holiday Love Slaves.
if it wasn't clear in how I wrote it... the idea I was going with was that the events of the former story happened... but no one remembers it. (though they may occasionally have dreams/nightmares about it)
Giving us a clean slate to work with... while also leaving it open if there was a path someone really wanted to go back to :P


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by C.King - 12/18/2017 1:52 PM

  1.  I think it went from a Holiday thread, to a Holiday slave thread, to your reboot on the same thread. Better a reboot in the same spot, since before we had hundreds of the similar stories on multiple threads. Best have multiple versions in multiple dimensions caused by an interdimensional darkness.
  2.  What should we expect from the Characters Atnas and Mistress Claus? Any major themes and kinkys? Should we expect others to show up?


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by JimmyKasche - 12/18/2017 6:09 PM

the entity was already setup in the original story (or well the second story... after Valentine's day) with the entity being the one who setup the evil Cupid. 

Didn't set up exactly what their themes are... other than like otherwise being the same as otherwise being Love Slaves to villains... usually...


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by gothamalleyviper - 12/21/2017 1:33 AM

I have an idea for the start of a complete reboot but I limited connectivity.  I will try to get a few written up and will try to post.


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by ESchorcho - 12/27/2017 9:59 AM

I think we need to keep this Christmas Succubus around all year long.  She's fun!


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by gothamalleyviper - 12/27/2017 2:13 PM

Saddly by even the 12 days of Christmas her powers would be spent the first week of January after three Kings day (Spanish present opening day).  Does anyone have any good holidays in January?  In the US there is MLK in the middle of the month.  


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by C.King - 12/27/2017 3:11 PM

  • Options...
  • Keep Krampus  to keep the Christmas Spirit all year long
  • Keep Krampus, build a team of evil holiday mascots
  • Holidays:New Years, Superbowl Sunday, MLK Day, Children's Day, Husband's day, Feasts of Fools, Sausage Day, Strawberry day, Blood Mary Day, and so on. Just check January on Wikipedia for all of the holidays.


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by JimmyKasche - 12/27/2017 3:29 PM

I keep trying to come up with something for this thread... but don't really have any ideas for the villain but still.

Well Krampus is already working for someone the evil force that summoned her. 
Don't really have any ideas for January... we could start the Valentines day thing earlier and give that 5 weeks of that :P


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by ESchorcho - 12/27/2017 11:43 PM

I agree on all the other holidays, and maybe starting a Valentine's Day plot would be best.  I just would hope that the plot points from this Christmas Holiday Love Story would carry on.  Selina has her kittens, Lex has Lois and Mercy, Harley has Kitty and so on.  When I mentioned that I had hoped the Christmas Succubus arc could go on, I was in a way referring to the line in A Christmas Carol where it says to keep the Christmas spirit alive all year.  Maybe the fact that Selina and Lex and Harley have these new slaves empowers the Succubus to stick around a bit.  It's just a thought.  Let me know what you think.


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by JimmyKasche - 12/28/2017 11:49 AM

well yes, I assumed the love slaves Krampus would make would hang around still.


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by C.King - 12/28/2017 12:15 PM

Maybe the Succubus could find the way to morph into new Holiday icons. Like a New Years baby, or Valentines Cupid or Aphrodite (if you want a female), A Leprechaun, An Easter Bunny, A mother/Father (also a mum can be a dad and a dad can be a mum), an Fool, A Uncle Sam/Lady Liberty/Canadian Icon, A Worker, A Halloween Icon, a Turkey/Pilgrim/Native American, and back to Krampus. Thoughts?


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by JimmyKasche - 12/28/2017 2:15 PM

I'm fine with that.

managed to write something finally... 
if my first option wasn't clear I was thinking something like Wonder Woman believes things like  Power Girl is nothing but a stupid blonde bimbo and so she breaks bitches for her Master :P


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by gothamalleyviper - 12/31/2017 2:27 AM

So a possible thought, what if Mercy and or Lois is pregnant with Lex's child while they are turning into artificial Kryptonians. Yes high possibility of a miscarriage, but Lex getting his won H/K child to raise how he wants?


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by C.King - 12/31/2017 6:45 AM

 Possible. Children are more flexible often then adults biologically.


RE: Holiday Love Slaves

by JimmyKasche - 1/1/2018 12:09 PM

A couple ideas I'm working on and possibly write if I can find some time.

for the Norman/MJ thing... 
one thing Norman giving her a less than flattering Goblin name...  Since Goblin Queen is taken already, after all :P 
Also potentially pushing her modeling into more adult direction... something like if she was truly done being "good" she wouldn't be modeling clothes no matter how skimpy... :P
Also had the idea that since the bad/naughty/Suc/cupid is in Vegas maybe have her interrupt Zatanna's show but don't have an idea as for what villain to be in attendance :P

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