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Wonder Woman is finally asking for help to why she is missing time
[Doctor Hero and Mister Villain]
Tuesday, April 23, 2013 2:52 PM
He is suspicious of her transformation
[Disney Princess Corruption]
Saturday, June 08, 2013 4:38 PM
Wonder Woman and Ms. Marvel are waiting for him back at the base...
[The Alpha Essence]
Monday, April 29, 2013 2:06 PM
Bruce test it on himself first.
[Master PC 2.9]
Wednesday, May 08, 2013 7:47 AM
She decides to focus on the Groom like...
[The Wedding Planner]
Wednesday, May 15, 2013 5:36 PM
She decides to focus on the Bride like...
[The Wedding Planner]
Thursday, May 16, 2013 9:28 AM
One of the other wives is already on hand.
[Super-Polygamists Party]
Thursday, June 06, 2013 8:27 AM
She finds him in the privacy of his personal lab
[Doctor Hero and Mister Villain]
Tuesday, April 23, 2013 3:45 PM
A Call from Home
[Trouble in Paradise]
Saturday, April 27, 2013 4:35 PM
Wonder Woman calls for an emergency meeting of the Justice League founders
[Trouble in Paradise]
Sunday, April 28, 2013 3:58 PM
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colleem - 7/15/2018 1:28 PM
creating Atmosphere. Then it is good written i say :)
colleem - 7/15/2018 1:27 PM
i am with Solar :) Size matters IF it is used good :) Chapters should have a certain depth to the Story and should create an Atmosphere that is more than 200 Words long :) But it is hard to say a chapter is long or short! it has to be well written and
Solarsearcher - 7/15/2018 12:13 PM
Contrary to what you may or may not have been told... size matters...
zahnskye - 7/15/2018 4:09 AM
If I write something super long it is because I'm trying to write more than one scene and sometimes I cannot fit everything I want into a short post.
zahnskye - 7/15/2018 4:08 AM
Also, short isn't bad. If you think of this site as a cyoa site (which it is) then each chapter should be written as one scene in a novel. Scenes are usually short and should serve a point.
zahnskye - 7/15/2018 4:07 AM
I just read a few chapters of yours. They don't suck. Sure they might be a little short but these were from a few years ago.
extreme1 - 7/12/2018 6:21 PM
If you wanna see actual bad writing the you should read some of my stuff sometime.
zahnskye - 7/12/2018 5:03 PM
Oh, well thanks. I appreciate the kind words. I'm always worried about the quality of my work so it's nice to hear I don't suck.
Solarsearcher - 7/12/2018 4:17 PM
I quite enjoy your works, like I do with a lot of contributors to this site.
extreme1 - 7/12/2018 1:18 PM
The few things I've read from you, I've enjoyed.



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