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Felicia declines untill MJ strips too
[One More Way with One More Day]
Thursday, April 24, 2014 3:32 AM
The Parkers pheromones can seduce anyone given enough time and exposure, but when both of them work together their power is at least doubled.
[One More Way with One More Day]
Friday, April 25, 2014 9:56 AM
...and more into a more attractively perfect form like MJ and Peter.
[One More Way with One More Day]
Sunday, April 27, 2014 11:08 AM
"I'd love to," Felicia said, "but..."
[One More Way with One More Day]
Monday, April 28, 2014 1:00 AM
"Better check in on Aunt May first."
[One More Way with One More Day]
Monday, April 28, 2014 10:58 PM
"The SHRA was defeated in congress two months ago after Captain America made a speech before Congress."
[One More Way with One More Day]
Tuesday, April 29, 2014 9:56 AM
Peter and MJ stop halfway to Avengers Tower for a quickie.
[One More Way with One More Day]
Sunday, May 04, 2014 12:45 AM
Peter and MJ continue having sex, releasing their pheromones into the air over Manhattan.
[One More Way with One More Day]
Sunday, May 04, 2014 12:50 AM

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colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
Danknoodle420 - 7/18/2017 10:52 PM
Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
extreme1 - 7/17/2017 11:50 AM
The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.
Evva - 7/17/2017 6:33 AM
cool
extreme1 - 7/16/2017 10:26 PM
Evva, I can read it fine.
Evva - 7/16/2017 9:20 PM
Guys, can you read my chapter clearly? http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=334884



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