Peter's jaw dropped. Increasing Ms Marvel's bust-size and libido while making her totally adore him and always able to find him was one thing (well, four things), but being confronted by the reality of it was another. More significantly, while making his fantasy of Carol servicing him come true, without realizing it, he'd gone and made the other part of the fantasy true; of their being not one but five of her.

And all five were hovering in front of his window! One wore her original midriff-baring costume, another he classic black costume, a third wore her Binary costume, the fourth wore her new Captain Marvel costume, while the fifth wore street clothes. All five had had their tops destroyed by their expanding breasts, yet showed no inclination to cover up their awe-inspiring assets. "Classic" Carol knocked on the window.

"Can we come in, Pete?" she said. Peter gulped and let them in. There was an awkward silence for a moment, and then "Binary" Carol spoke up.

"We know you did this to us, Peter. Don't know how we know, or how you did it, but we know it was you."

"it's okay, though," said "Original" Carol. "We like...no, we love what you've done to us...what you've done FOR us."

Pete stared. "Seriously?"

They nodded in unison. "Seriously," said "Civilian" Carol. "It's probably a side-effect of the transformation, but I wouldn't dream of going back to the way we were before."

More nodding, and then "Captain" Carol declared, "Now that we've cleared that up, Peter, we were wondering..."

Next Chapters

• "...how we can best serve and please you?"
• "...if you could alter us some more?" (Open)
• "..would you you mind changing some other people?" (Open)
• Before the Carols could finish, an emergency arose requiring their attention. (Open)

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